The world as I see it is not very nice,
People drinkin’ and smokin’ man that’s not right!
Gangs sellin dope at the end of a street,
People too afraid to call to the police.
People treat people with no respect,
That’s why some fights end in death.
People think that’s fun and they think it’s cool
The world as i see it should get rid of these fools.
The parents are the ones that don’t treat them right,
That’s why kids don’t come home some nights.
They not layin’ in someone else’s bed,
Nah...It’s because they dead.
People drinkin’ and smokin’ man that’s not right!
Gangs sellin dope at the end of a street,
People too afraid to call to the police.
People treat people with no respect,
That’s why some fights end in death.
People think that’s fun and they think it’s cool
The world as i see it should get rid of these fools.
The parents are the ones that don’t treat them right,
That’s why kids don’t come home some nights.
They not layin’ in someone else’s bed,
Nah...It’s because they dead.
is this your poem for the contest if so its great
ReplyDeleteVery, Very, Very True<3
ReplyDeleteThat's exactly how I see it.
ReplyDeleteAwesome. I'm feelin a lot of the ideas from the the Black Eyed Peas song we studied in class. Great work. This is going to be a strong entry in the contest!
ReplyDeletethis is really good X! keep up the good work man!
ReplyDeletegood story its really true so keep up the good poems and always remeber stay cheezy like cheezy gritz
ReplyDeleteThats a good blog for the challenge
ReplyDeletethat was a great story and poem!
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